- There's too much description of the landscape that I care very little for.
- In spite of the excessive landscape description, non-natural "things" are never described... Hearing what the hills surrounding my characters look like, while having barely any detail about what they are wearing, handling, and interacting with leaves me disengaged.
- It's very annoying reading people constantly singing without any tune guidance.
Maybe I'll just watch the movies.
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